Sunday, 8 February 2015

TALENT






It is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents, for instance for sport or music, and others are not. However, it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musician.





Some people believe that people have their own talents when they were born. However, it is my contention that all people have the chance to obtain their talents if they try hard enough.

It has been argued that people get their talents because they inherit the talents from their parents. For example, children whose mother and father have music talents, will get those talents from their parents. However, even though the children have that talent from their talents, the talent will not be maximized if they not practice to improve their talent. As a result, the children may not become famous musicians like their parents.

Moreover, another argument supporting the belief that people get their talent when they are born is the fact that many famous people who are expert in sport and music were born to parents who have the same talent. However, there are also many athletes and musicians who were born from parents who do not have the same talent. For example, Krisdayanti, a famous female singer in Indonesia. In addition, some famous athletes and musicians started their career without any talent related to their job. Therefore, they achieved their high level of expertise by attending routine training and working hard to improve their skills.

In conclusion, all people have the opportunity to become successful athletes and musicians, even though they do not have a special talent in that area. They can acquire a high level of expertise, if they make a serious effort to improve their skills ability. (RO)

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