Monday, 24 November 2014

Susscessful Sports Professional

    Some people believe that successful sports professionals can earn more money when they are win some world competitions than other essential occupations, for example doctors. In this essay, I will argue that it is fair because they spend a lot of time for training to prepare for the competitions and also they make a valuable contribution to their country when they are win.

    The opponents who think that sports professionals, such as soccer players earn more much money than other job, for instance doctors, emphasise that the sportmen do not use their brain for studying educated subject like medicine. They think that the athletes just spend their time to exercise and even just manage their body to keep healthy. Besides that, they do not need to spend their money on university courses especially medicine faculty, which has higher fees than other subjects.

   However, the supporters who think that it is fair argue that professionals athletes bring the name of their country to the world competition. So, it is justified for them to earn much money, either from their organisations or the companies as their funding support bodies. They argue that they also spend a lot of time for exercise and preparing their mental and physical before they play in the worldwide popular competition.

   To sum up, I will say that if the sports professionals can earn a great more money and bonuses than other crucial professions like doctor, it is still acceptable because each profession has its benefits. Maybe, one of the benefits of being a successful soccer player is they can earn more money especially when they are win prestigious competition such as World Cup, Olympic, Asean Football Federation and so on. Moreover, if they win competition and became famous, they are likely to earn additional money from sponsors. (DAR)

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