Sunday, 8 February 2015

KEEPING ANIMAL IN ZOOS






Keeping animals in captivity is cruel. There is no reason for zoos to exist in the 21st century.
Discuss some of the arguments in favor of and against the existence of zoos.




 In many countries, there are several zoos in the big cities. Some animals are kept in cages, and other animals are kept outside of cages. Some people say that put animal in zoos is not good, because the animals are supposed to be free in their original habitat. Other people say that the zoos are very important to protect animal from extinction.
Some people believe that the animals have the right to live in their natural habit not in the zoos, so they can live together with their family. However, in the zoos they can also meet with other members of their species, so they can live together with others.
Moreover, there are several animals which have lack population in in the world, such as elephants, rhinoceros, and tigers. In order to continue their generations, the government keep the animal in the zoos. And then, the zoos will take care of them, give them food, and other things that will be needed for the animals. Besides that, if the animals are sick, the zoos services will take animal doctor to cure the animals. And this cannot be done if the animals live in their own habitat.
In addition, the services of the zoos for the animal are better over the years, so the animals can live in good conditions. There is another reason why it is good to keep animal in the zoos, because the zoos are open for the public so the society can also control the conditions of the animals.
In conclusion, keeping animals in zoos is not cruel, because the animals are kept in a good place and the zoos will take care of them. Besides that, the government do the right action to keep animals, which have lack of population in order to continue their generation. (RO)

TALENT






It is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents, for instance for sport or music, and others are not. However, it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musician.





Some people believe that people have their own talents when they were born. However, it is my contention that all people have the chance to obtain their talents if they try hard enough.

It has been argued that people get their talents because they inherit the talents from their parents. For example, children whose mother and father have music talents, will get those talents from their parents. However, even though the children have that talent from their talents, the talent will not be maximized if they not practice to improve their talent. As a result, the children may not become famous musicians like their parents.

Moreover, another argument supporting the belief that people get their talent when they are born is the fact that many famous people who are expert in sport and music were born to parents who have the same talent. However, there are also many athletes and musicians who were born from parents who do not have the same talent. For example, Krisdayanti, a famous female singer in Indonesia. In addition, some famous athletes and musicians started their career without any talent related to their job. Therefore, they achieved their high level of expertise by attending routine training and working hard to improve their skills.

In conclusion, all people have the opportunity to become successful athletes and musicians, even though they do not have a special talent in that area. They can acquire a high level of expertise, if they make a serious effort to improve their skills ability. (RO)

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